It is claimed that the professional suck as doctors, nurses and teachers had a fundamental roles in society compared with the celebrities in sport or entertainment fields. I firmly agree with this opinion and in this essay, i will clear up my mind with the most relevant evidences.
First of all, it is obvious that the people who work in education and health care experts have the most essential in this world. Especial in this crisis regarding to covid-19, residents in this planet have realised the emphasis of those people. In other words, the doctors and nurses devote themselves to save the human from the epidemic and cure the people in desease which is the thing the ordinary people need to have gratitude to them. Nowadays, humans are threaten by many deseases and it is deniable that doctors and nurses are playing a crucial role in this chaos period. Turing to the education, the society will be better or not which is depended on the teachers who are guiding the new generation. All of those things convince that these people are important much more than the celebrities.
However, the entertainment also significantly impact to the society which is followed by lots of people every day. They help people to relax and enjoy the life and they certainly influence in the public via media and other ways. Anyway, it still cannot be as much vital as the health care and education in this society.
To sum up, the doctors, nurse and teachers are taking the greatest duty which is so far from the celebrities in entertainment and sport fields.
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or dis agree with this opinion 56
- Violence in playgrounds is increasing However it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies Discuss this view and give your opinion 56
- A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture nationalities To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 75
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Violence in playgrounds is increasing However it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies Discuss this view and give your opinion 53
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...gratitude to them. Nowadays, humans are threaten by many deseases and it is deniable tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8171641791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58086794931 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1433239925 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197555512945 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708207844913 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645464148247 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12262628243 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422061030444 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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