Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
The problem of water shortage which has always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is hazardous while others reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years .In my opinion the shortage of water as a natural resource is a great problem
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there are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that over population leads to migration and urbanization which results in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources.Another pivotal aspect is that mixture of pollution causes global warming which leads to natural disasters like floods,drought and under such conditions there is no water.Hence it is apparent that water shortage is a global threat.
steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical.Besides this there should be recycling of water and even rain water harvesting is very helpful in storing fresh water.Primarily afforestation reduces pollution and maintains water cycles.Moreover strict laws should be made against pollution.
To recapitulate according to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of water crisis can be successfully addressed provided that the above stated measures are taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21449691209 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8749167776 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.0 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.75 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0399251169289 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263080106942 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00984367403182 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0263080106942 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00984367403182 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.0946893788 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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