Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films,tv, video games and computers instead.
The importance of teaching from books and computers which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people believing that the computer games and films are more beneficial and others reject this explain the benefits of both books and computer games.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further,the first and foremost benefit of books is that, they are more rational therefore they help to develop more clarity. Another striking benefit is that books improve the writing skills.Categorically stating , it cannot be ignored that the shelf-life of the books is very long and a child can always take his time to re-read the concepts.
Probing ahead and explaining the advantages of computer games,TV,and films are that ,they have very strong audio-visual impact which further helps to develop the interest and increases retention.Moving further , it is pertinent to mention that it is the need of an hour to be updated with latest computer games because computer games and other digital gadgets enable a child to develop the habit of being creative.
To sum up, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one may reach to the conclusion that the benefits of the techniques of teaching among children whether traditional or online, both are very important , therefore balance should be created.
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- Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books because students find them boring and that children can learn from films tv video games and computers instead 56
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading To what extent do you agree Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97357015206 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.768729249 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 224.0 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172971157398 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871320168578 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563666444612 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102756647384 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518059528942 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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