Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many
countries. What are some of the problems associated with
drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Along with the development of medicine and modern technology, most people are gradually becoming overdepent on drugs. While this trend is bound to cause several pitfalls, proper remedies could be taken to diminish them.
As drugs are becoming more and more popular people become to abuse them, which is anticipated to result in some related issues. The main problem is that drug abuse will cause many potential diseases that users may fail to know. For example, in case that people misuse analgesic, it is easy for them to have stomach problems because of the side effects. Moreover, people take pills whenever they want is the culprit causing drug resistance. More particularly, when patients have a disease more than once, the drugs will gradually reduce the effects of removing the virus, which can cause death.
There are several measures for people to address the foregoing problems. The first solution could be for governments to adjust drug sales by requesting that pharmacies can only sell drugs when buyers have a doctor’s prescription so people cannot buy and use drugs arbitrarily. The second measure comes from people’s awareness of the use of medicines. Therefore, more courses on health care should be opened for all participants to better understand how to use drugs correctly.
In conclusion, manifold remedies can be taken to solve the problems of drug abuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69826096679 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5338503613 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210862124739 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764494646982 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872874569969 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113968519958 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789662576765 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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