Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, it is undeniable, crimes rate surge day by day in the parts of the world. there are so many consquences that can be considered to rise in the non-scoial activites and there are also innumerable solutiona to overcome the crima rate in the world and this essay will articulate the reasons along with preventions to reduce the criminal activities in the forthcoming paragraphs.
The predominent reason is unemployement. In other words, the people are jobless nowadays due to rise in population in the world. so, individuals are doing anti social activities to get money. For instance, there is a lot of competition among civilians for acquiring a job and not all can get the jobs. Hence, people comminting crimes to fulfill their desires.
However, there are some measures can be take to overcome the crime rate. To elaborate it, regime can decline the criminal activities by employed more and more residents. If government would provide jobs to thier people , then they can overcome the offenders in their regions. Moreover, law makers must awere the residents by spread awerness between indiviuals. To epitome, government can organise the counsling sessions to aware the msses about bad effects of the crime.
Thus, regime can reduce the anti social acvities to follow these steps.
To conclude, although, crime rats are growing, it can be prevent to follow the formentioned steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15652173913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83129459456 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2590301394 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172238384297 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574448776146 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448167930825 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917914361638 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546081051153 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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