ecological balance is impossible to achieve when technological progress constantly ruins our lives .do you agree?
technological systems became one of the most usable things and wildly dispersed among every country of the world , wherever it is urban or rural area . Those systems almost invested in all the diversities of societies . They changed them in a great manner as they made life became better and easy , on the other hand , they worsen the environment that we all live in .
years ago , to be precised in the beginning of 18th peoples were depending on the natural powers beside there own forces to manage their lives effectively , starting from preparation of water to drink and filtering it ,they tended to use manual machines . To set another example they were using their hands in addition to simple tools in harvesting there food . By doing so they kept their environment clean and unpolluted . so they did not need to bring new thoughts to keep them selves and the creatures around them healthy .
nowadays and as a shadow of decades ago , new implementations and machines had been admitted to our societies . despite of they are helping us in every thing , they still harming us as well as will affect our offspring by inducing pollution .
all governmental offices raised an issue upon saving the planet from pollution and keeping the well balanced climate by decreasing the constantly upgrading nasty effects of investing systems . To add , a lot of non governmental agencies are encouraging people to deal with technology wisely and carefully in order to keep the nature from destruction .
In conclusion , we can safely say that ecological systems affect our safety and destruct almost all trials that have been done to keep ecological balance . In my opinion this problem will always makes headaches for the scientists and population as general .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03472222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74682675683 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8820424956 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103204682356 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334727132864 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342286607959 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056735689802 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258239139374 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.