Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common child hood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Childhood diseases immunization system became one of the globally well known programs, that had been implicated in almost all countries whether developed or under-developed. It certainly became one the the cornerstones in health system organizations. However, there is a group of people who still hold on an opinion that immunity should be considered as a naturally occurring process.
Those who think that immunization is essential believe that young child's illnesses are very dangerous and fatal, despite that they are not so prevalent. They also state that those infections happen in outbreaks. Moreover, such diseases usually affect the general health of their victims, and in majority of cases they result in great disabilities. They strongly adhere to the concept that says "prevention is better than cure". This statement supports their opinion of admitting preventive materials to babies early on. As this will effectively rescue the youth of the future from being hurt by external harmful organisms.
On the other hand, still there are some people who argue that defensive mechanisms should be gained by time spontaneously. This will give the offspring the ability to get rid of the unwanted germs by natural elements of the immunization system efficiently. They are very unsatisfied with the worldwide health policies that tend to force them to immunize their kids. They also speak about that their ancestors in the previous centuries survived without having to use any of those external hostile drugs. They persistently deny the small percentage of disease possibility.
We can safely conclude that illnesses are increasing continuously and exponentially. In addition, germs are consistently reproducing new versions of themselves. For that particular point we have to prevent our children from being attacked by those nasty diseases using the techniques of immunization.
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...reventive materials to babies early on. As this will effectively rescue the youth ...
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...se any of those external hostile drugs. They persistently deny the small percentage ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210031347962 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.169278996865 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0815047021944 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0815047021944 0.0501214627716 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532915360502 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0501567398119 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07337736046 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0219435736677 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971786833856 0.0861772015684 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0156739811912 0.021408717616 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188087774295 0.011925033212 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1898.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56747404844 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411764705882 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318339100346 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266435986159 0.203846283523 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186851211073 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07337736046 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 73.9133761079 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1361722054 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 48.8339100346 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.30927835052 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200645927497 0.332605444948 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0762725499266 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551537437678 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471040222915 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0976267261993 0.148594505496 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720663973014 0.134430193775 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660673710675 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313221763969 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0960038343742 0.0638462369009 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128282121155 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561373513685 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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