Ecotourism is now defined as responsible travel to natural areas that conserves the environment.What are the advantages of ecotourism? How can we make ecotourism more popular?
OR the last decade ecotourism has become incredibly popular since awareness about environmental issues is rising among the population. Nowadays green tourism is determined as accountable trips to remote regions that preserves THE nature. I am convinced that economic support and impact on the community are two main advantages of ecotourism and promotion of this trend should be boosted via social networks and travel agents.
Firstly, one of the advantages which is local financial support secures sustainable growth of local communities. Most such tourist places are located in remote areas that is why it heavily relies on tourists to build their economy. For instance, regular travel returns only 20% of revenue back to local communities while eco can return as much as 95%. ЭТО НЕ ПРИМЕР Hence, a constant stream of visitors will ensure the financial improvement of the inhabitants.
The second advantage is a positive impact on community culture. Rural tourism not only creates jobs for locals, but it also promotes and preserves traditional practices rather than altering native customs to fit specific international norms. For example, many travelers adore Africa for its unique involvement visitors into communities’ everyday life where they learn how to cook local delicacies and participate in national dances. Thus, sustainable tourism creates cultural connections between travelers and citizens.
These days a variety of social networks enable to promote eco-friendly tourism. This can be done through creating a content strategy, preparing infographics,building an active community of eco-travellers and encouraging conversation among them. At the end of 2018 was established one russian start-up which organizes eco trips to Europe and it has grown significantly during one year using proper strategy for advertising their services on Instagram.
To conclude, local economic sustainability and preservation of culture play a significant role in providing long-term benefits to a community and for further development of ecotourism social networks we need to to raise awareness about the environment and to educate the public on conservation through social networks.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72782874618 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16470767811 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65749235474 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6817003244 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148825887342 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431173844826 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451163560488 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819184541523 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500029225455 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nancial improvement of the inhabitants. The second advantage is a positive impac...
^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , building
...content strategy, preparing infographics,building an active community of eco-travellers a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evelopment of ecotourism social networks we need to to raise awareness about the ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... of ecotourism social networks we need to to raise awareness about the environment a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72782874618 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16470767811 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65749235474 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6817003244 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148825887342 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431173844826 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451163560488 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819184541523 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500029225455 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.