Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website.
Educating children is more difficult because they spent their more time on using cell phone and sitting on social networking site which destroyed children and it is also the cause of distraction .
firstly , children waste their whole time on cell phone they did not give the time to study watch new technology waste their whole time in these technology and it distract mind of children from study and the cellphone it has the side effect that in the cell phone there is raises . talk to much in the cell phone causes many diasses like cancer and many other diases . my friend use the cell phone too much that he became the addictive of these technology that it cause him a cancer. using cell phone too much is not good for health .
secondly , using social sites divert the mind of children from study because they watch useless thing which not give them a benefit and it is not good for health for that reason children did not take of their health and using these too much children became the addiction of these things . whenever teacher give the homework to children they took from the websites and they did not use their brain and this way it decrease the knowledge of children and also creativity and children became a lazy because they did not use their mind while searching from web sites . children did not focus to study for this reason give whole whole time to social sites which is dangerous for children .
thirdly , miss communication students communicate with unknown peoples without knowing them each other they trust each other which destroyed the life of students . they waste their whole time in communicating with new people they did not give the time to study and it also divert the mind of children form study . children have became the addiction of communication .
we don't waste their time using cell phone , social networking sites and miss communication it is very bad habit and it also cause dieseases . we go in loss for this reason .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271708683473 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.168067226891 0.116061578633 145% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868347338936 0.0759168565197 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0644257703081 0.0366838410393 176% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0924369747899 0.0131127313244 705% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112044817927 0.155750635184 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0280112044818 0.0379272487307 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31688962363 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0168067226891 0.0210936926555 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0840336134454 0.0948980150116 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140056022409 0.00967000014798 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1968.0 1161.00487805 170% => OK
No of words: 356.0 196.9 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52808988764 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.73763899035 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.238764044944 0.337110787985 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171348314607 0.247514529752 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129213483146 0.171178102325 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0674157303371 0.112407865282 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31688962363 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.356741573034 0.546246751206 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.3437094174 49.3433353143 74% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 27.3846153846 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.605051557 42.9750493124 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.384615385 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.689975730869 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 1.48048780488 3107% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.5194468453 47.7609492067 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.26724137931 2.94281807926 43% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364102936843 0.418131533498 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199356746254 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131378196703 0.0850326197045 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.640430183168 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192070734657 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169135697825 0.228904883108 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108475064891 0.108899403657 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32702985106 0.367819155151 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12284847109 0.0812612215331 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269687896064 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106922147042 0.0921553760075 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.14146341463 964% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 0.956097560976 1151% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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