Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website.
There are some reasons that the majority of children spend too much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. And this is too destructive for their future life, physical and mental health. Three are some reasons that I talk over them. First of all, nowadays parents prefer to feed children since childhood with cell phone instead of grappling with them at home. Therefore, children get used to spend time on cell phone from early age.
Second of all, most of children have no siblings to play with them and thus online games and social networking website become as fellow gamer for them which are available in every situation. Furthermore, this kind of fellow gamer is full of creativity and attractiveness for children in every age. Gradually children get addicted to cell phone and unconsciously it could be as a serious distraction during the education.
Psychologists believe there is the second kind of intelligence called EQ (emotional quotient) that is able to discriminate between different feelings and guides thinking and behavior. Improving EQ of children will help them to overcome on their unnecessary and useless tasks. In other word, this ability will lead to do essential tasks at right time. Children with high EQ aren’t distracted by cell phone, online games and, social networking websites, hence they study as they are supposed.
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear energy provides cheap and clean energy.The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. 57
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...phone from early age. Second of all, most of children have no siblings to play with them and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275618374558 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.137809187279 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116607773852 0.0946595960268 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0318021201413 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0459363957597 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137809187279 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0318021201413 0.0403226058552 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66232454895 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247349823322 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0565371024735 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106007067138 0.021408717616 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00706713780919 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1556.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15019762846 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351778656126 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252964426877 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205533596838 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126482213439 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66232454895 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.0507444151 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4615384615 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3698829323 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 44.7579811493 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 2.06557377049 1.69124875643 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498769474799 0.332605444948 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11811122962 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124940811441 0.0668466124924 187% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530369476007 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18774802567 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201205822425 0.134430193775 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.250251033193 0.0742795772207 337% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333759583958 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.035514542323 0.0638462369009 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.431688729775 0.228012699653 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.329347249607 0.058150111329 566% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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