education
Currently, families tend to send their children to private schools over public ones. Therefore, some residents debate that they should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my point of view.
On the one hand, we need to consider why families think that way. We all know that private schools' fee is really expensive, in return for a better experience for students with more equipment, modern facilities, and extracurricular activities compared to public schools. Some wealthy parents can pay that amount easily, however, students in private schools don't just come from rich families. For example, there are some students who can’t pass the entrance exam of public schools, so they have to apply to private schools with lower entrance scores. In those cases, tuition fees can be a burden for unwealthy families. Thus, they are likely to consider not supporting the government education system with their hard-earned salaries.
On the other hand, paying taxes is the responsibility of all citizens. Firstly, the amount of tax they pay is used not only for education but also for other areas such as environment, health, and transportation. Secondly, tax retrieval can become difficult when there are people who do not have to pay taxes, and this can also lead to dissatisfaction of some inhabitants. In that sense, the thinking that those families who decide to send their children to private school institutions must be freed from paying taxes is definitely inappropriate.
To sum up, there are many sides to the question of whether or not to pay taxes. In my point of view, I support the idea that paying taxes is fair for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74646336705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3409441977 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931089879766 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373461545548 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750092403048 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062222106268 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426066580596 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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