Education should be accessible to people from all economic backgrounds . All levels of education should be free .
It is commonly argued that people regardless their financial state should have access to education. While I agree that primary and high school ought to be free , I feel that there should be tuition fee for studying at a university .
On the one hand , one of the most important objectives that a government prioritizes with regard to education is high literacy rate . This can be accomplished through free and compulsory primary and high school education system . If these schools were charged , parents , who are struggling financially or unemployed , might not be able to afford to send their children to a school . This would cause social problems , such as increasing gap between the poor ,who do not have enough money to get proper education to secure their career, and the rich who can pay for school , and personal issues , for example , illiterate parent could not read description on the carton of medicine when his or her child is ill . In short, free high and primary schools are essential for a healthy society and a stable government .
On the other hand , I feel that tertiary education should have tuition fee to study . Firstly , universities need enough amount of money to function properly , so that the part of the money, that students pay , can be spent on new campus buildings , recreation places for students , employing qualified teachers and researches . As a result , students will acquire the knowledge that are useful in their future . In addition , by paid high education , the government will make sure that there is balanced kind of workers in workplaces . If all universities were free , majority of people would continue their study after school . This would cause that there would be a decrease in the number of labor workers . Consequently , certain services , ranging from repairing equipment to taxi driving , could experience a considerable rise in their prices . This would have a negative effect on society .
In conclusion , it seems to me that tertiary education should be charged , whereas primary and high schools ought to be free .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, whereas, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, as a result, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76137936546 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7082032062 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278049742212 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940754213902 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828663052743 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213518938293 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727650516411 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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