The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important, and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that the education of adolesence is highly prioritized in many nation, but education adults who can not write and read is even more significant, and more revenue should be supported by the state. From my point of view, i mostly agree with notion because of its benefits of their country development. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern technology, academic knowledge and language is hugely neccessary for the individual life. Not only do language is the fundamental way for communicating and interacting, but also the number of unemployment and crime of their nation can be reduced graduately. Furthermore, The person mentality will be improved by this method, providing numerous advantage knowledge, valuable information. To illustrate, there was a survey by Tarra, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of nation where have high percentage of literate people. The statistic showed that nearly every country has got a various of achevements.
However, we can not negate the importance of educated young generation for the nation development. The teenager is the key element for a plenty of fields such as education, medical and entertainment, and also a lot of genius idea will be created by the young which improve economic background. Morover, government should balance in the development of both generation.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement since this problem can have numerous strength for the nation. The government need to have clear plans for improvement their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...try has got a various of achevements. However, we can not negate the importanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27819548872 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00038627924 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1919239963 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218686693272 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692674176651 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103627596918 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138583007309 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121638918604 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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