Electronic gadgets such as Mobile phones should be banned in schools To what extent do you agree Give reasons in support of your answer

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Electronic gadgets such as Mobile phones should be banned in schools. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons in support of your answer.

Nowadays, every step of life has touched and ably assisted by electronic devices and applications. Therefore, in my notion, using mobile phones in schools should not be restricted.

First of all, mobile phone has become inevitable part of everyone's life and students are no exception to this trend. Students are enormously benefited from such devices when they need deep information on certain topic in a click. Such in-depth knowledge otherwise would not have been possible only from teacher's effort. For eg. a teacher can only teach an general outline of an Egyptian pyramid but an encyclopedia...

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has become inevitable part
has become an inevitable part

students are no exception to this trend.
students are not in exception to this trend.
there are no exception to this trend for students.

has become more pervasive nature.
has become more pervasive.
has become more pervasive as a nature.
has become a more pervasive nature.

Another obvious advantage of having electronic gadgets is student can readily grasp
Another obvious advantage of having electronic gadgets is that student can readily grasp

that mobile phone have brought many ills
that mobile phones have brought many ills

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