Employer should not be concerned about the way their employees are dressed at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?(1.13)
In contemporary world, the success of a company depends on many factors. In my opinion, business owner should not only focus on employees’ working quality, but also lay more stress on clothing preferences.
The concern about employees' effort on working is the key to build a promising company. This is because the supervision from managers requires employees to concentrate on their work, which may therefore helps to provide better products and offer thoughtful services to customers. In manufacturing, for example, strict rules and incentive mechanisms encourage workers to produce high-quality toys, kitchenwares or household appliances, all of which may put companies in an advantageous position in market competition.
However, business owners should not ignore the impacts brought the way people dressed. By that I mean casual clothing may damage companies's fame and the outlook for market. Food factories, where neat uniforms are in demand by customers, is a case in point when it comes to building stronger brand images for company. In contrast, consumers or potential business partners may have an impression that this company might not be qualified if they find out most people in here are wearing in slippers and short pants. Another example is that business men are not willing to cooperate with those shows up without a shirt on, since dressing this way is considered disrespectful toward others. In short, unified clothing and decent suits positively effect cooperation image and prospect.
In conclusion, it seems to me that focusing on working quality is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. Employers ought to take both clothing preference and working effort into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40740740741 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91638387812 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2772946512 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19825736174 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624559874359 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631063436746 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112325404371 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03344417302 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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