The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing? Give solutions to these problems.
The past few decades have witnessed dramatic changes in city development. However, this kind of growth exerts adverse impacts on young people's job employability and life quality, and effective solutions are required.
The expansion of urban area has allowed more people from less well-off regions to flock into megacities, imposing greater employment pressure on young people. This demographic change usually accompanies fierce competition in job hunting. Compared with those skillful counterparts, younger generations lack job experience and social adaptability, so these young people may fail in having a promising job.
Another problem associated with this fast growth is that young people may find it difficult to cover their daily expense. High cost of living in urban area may generate financial burden on those young people who live on tight budget, thereby forcing them to compromise on living quality. For example, they cannot afford to enjoy a movie or a trip across border to experience exotic culture, and in most cases they fail to bear ever-increasing housing price. As a result, young people may end up living in a distanced apartment, and they usually lead a low quality life.
It is of great importance to mitigate the negative influences, so governments are expected to provide effective measures. To begin with, imposing less tax can encourage young people to enjoy better daily essentials like advanced smart phones and high-tech laptops. What is more, governments should set up more job-relevant training courses to educate graduates to expand their skill set, which plays vital role in the competing scarce occupations.
In conclusion, conspicuous changes in metropolises come with corresponding problems, but these problems can be addressed by the intervention of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in most cases, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54512635379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93438521426 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678700361011 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0464976347 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223335357715 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675466273191 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04646446367 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108357821679 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324108765307 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.