Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?
It is considered by some that bosses ought to provide extended holidays to their workforce in order to perform their duties efficiently. This essay agrees with this assertion as vacations help to elevate productivity of a person and also aids to maintain a good work-life balance.
To begin with, holidays play a crucial role in increasing the creativity of the office staff. Working for longer duration in the office actually hampers the productivity of an employee because one hardly gets any time off to rejuvenate their mind and soul. Taking a couple of days off from work can help the workforce to alleviate their stress levels which would eventually ameliorate their fertility at work. Numerous companies, for instance, such as JustPark and Linkedin have recently introduced unlimited holiday policy to their staffs recently which has significantly improved the efficiency of these companies.
In addition to this, vacations are essential to maintain a good work-life balance in today’s face paced world. Everyone either a CEO or a junior level worker wants to spend some quality time with their friends and family. Taking extended holidays not only improves the personal lives of the employees, but also boosts an employee’s job satisfaction level. As an example, staff members who have a hectic work schedule and do not have much time to make social interactions will start to look down upon their jobs. As a consequence, the job satisfaction will diminish and the corporation’s efficiency will be affected adversely in the long run. Therefore, longer holiday policy is cardinal to maintain a high sense of job satisfaction among the employees.
To conclude, employers must encourage extended holiday scheme for their staff because it will increase the productiveness of the personnel as well as improved sense of work satisfaction which is a win- win state for both the bosses and the workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28338762215 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97964959454 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.244224842 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199864694586 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653458696897 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376368677396 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114391610372 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187517043378 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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