Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Over the past few years, few non-profit organisations, such as PETA, are coming in the favour of no violence against animals. In addition, contemporary society also sees this violence as inhuman and unmoral. This essay entirely agrees with the notion that blood sports should be banned as they make people insensitive towards animals.
How a sport which involves killing of animals can be amusing for people? It is morally wrong to capture animals, and train them to participate in activities such as dog fighting and cock fighting. In order to prepare creatures for such events, their owners treat them with no compassion or affection. In addition, these events leave the participants either dead or in immense pain. Therefore, such sports which take up life of an animal should never be encouraged.
Moreover, blood sports make its spectators less sensitive to animal life. For instance, people who witness such events may feel that it is conceivable to hold such games for entertainment purposes. Also, when an opponent wins, which means the other one dead, spectators may do not have any sympathy for the lost life. They think that it is the part of the game. Thus, hosting and encouraging these sports make the society thoughtless towards other life forms.
In conclusion, even though blood sport can bring lot of enthusiasm among its spectators, killing or hunting of a creature on the name of amusement is preposterous and may result in an inconsiderate society in the future. In my opinion, such sports should be prohibited on immediate basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7445541559 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9974443628 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230790971785 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771702976096 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610757124744 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141803293851 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159828120296 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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