Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
This modernization era, the adventure sports has been organized and it attracts the people as well as makes a large benefit for such projects or shows. Nowadays, the blood sports become a great threat for society whereas, it creates the unethical activities and also, impact the animal life. So, all these games should be banned. However, I larger extent disagree with this opinion because it is important for some societies.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the these sports are banned. The first and foremost is every populace and animal have their right to live with own way. Moreover, in the pastime people have done this activity because of entertainment but now they have myriad source of entertainment. Like, the television, mobile phones, music, internet and so on.Last but not the least, these sports effected the psychological aspects about relationship between the human and animals. To epitomise, now we see the lot of adventure program which show the blood sport and those people watch these type of sport their nature will be change to the other persons in this way, the humanity in the people are definitely decreased.
On the other side, these type of games should not be banned and the government should make the rule and regulation for these sports. Because, these sports are way for some people to earning the money if these are banned they have no other way to earn the money. Secondly, in the European countries these type of sports have traditional and cultural values. So, it has great importance for some countries. To epitomise, in Spain the blood sports organize every year for the entertainment and for money. More pressingly, the banning such sports is not the answer, because if these games are banning it births the problem because people have emotionally attachment with these sports.
To conclude, I think each coin has two aspects these sports have some benefits while many demerits. But, banning not be a good idea because, these sports became a part of people life. The government should implement the some conditions for these sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01146131805 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51403887364 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507163323782 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2802517229 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224137798565 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873831220067 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492782798162 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161360105679 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484272130696 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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