With the passage of time, companies are now more conscious about the feelings and health issues of workers. In today's era, employer should give enough holidays to employees for doing job-well. I agree with this statement because holidays are more beneficial for employees which i discussed in the subsequent paragraph.
There are numerous pros of vacations for subordinates. To begin with, main motive of each and every individuals to reduce their cost on health issues that's possibly only by granting enough holidays. For exemplify, the Framingham heart study found that men who did not take a vacation for a several years were 30% more likely to have heart attacks than men who take often holidays. It also revealed that woman who vacationed once every six years are likely to develop cornary heart diseases or have a heart attack than woman who took atleast two vacations per year. In addition, by longer break, staff members are feel more relaxed and out of depression. In this way, they do work very well and in a energetic manner.
Moreover, vacations are very helpful to make a strong bondings with their family ,relatives and friends which diminish the conflicts among family members and also raise a love and harmony between them. Additionally, individuals can get a opportunity to give more attention to their offsprings and keep on eye on each activity of children. Furthermore, labourers are working very well which increase not only the pay scale of workforce but also raise the growth and goodwill of companies.
To sum up, longer holidays are valuable for both companies and employees. If employees are satisfied from their job and take holiday package from employer, it is very fruitful for the company to increase productivity which will be make the good position in the market.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...are more beneficial for employees which i discussed in the subsequent paragraph. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s to reduce their cost on health issues thats possibly only by granting enough holida...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'year'?
Suggestion: year
...o did not take a vacation for a several years were 30% more likely to have heart atta...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a energetic manner" with adverb for "energetic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...In this way, they do work very well and in a energetic manner. Moreover, vacations are very helpfu...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...this way, they do work very well and in a energetic manner. Moreover, vacation...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'bonding'?
Suggestion: bonding
...tions are very helpful to make a strong bondings with their family ,relatives and friend...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...them. Additionally, individuals can get a opportunity to give more attention to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05704697987 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62596489609 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5790435207 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21781678282 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814375288127 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117179929929 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138835924884 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897885030329 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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