Environment
In recent years, global warming has been seen as a result of human activities such as urbanization and deforestation. However, these issues can be solved by addressing the causes properly.
To begin with, among all other causes, urbanization is the leading cause of the increased global temperature. As a result of urban areas, there has been an uncontrollable rise in vehicles and factories which release an abundant amount of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases. Owing to these gases, ozone layer has been depleted and harmful ultraviolet rays that now reaches the earth's surface more easily are increasing the global temperature. Take, for example, a report from an environmental organization has shown that the urban sprawl from 2000 to 2015 has peaked the global temperature by 5 degrees. Moreover, another prime reason for global warming appears to be deforestation. In other words, depleted forest areas would absorb less CO2 in the atmosphere. This piled up gases deplete the ozone layer and causes the temperature to rise.
However, the problem of global warming could be tackled by controlling the sources of harmful gases in urban areas. It means that, environment-friendly energy sources such as solar and hydropower cause less release of CO2 which will alleviate the issue of global warming. Furthermore, the problem of deforestation needs to be addressed by proper mass education about the importance of trees in maintaining the world's temperature. To be specific, such awareness programs tend to encourage people for plantation of trees on bare lands and avoid cutting down trees.
In conclusion, the two major stemming factors of global warming are urbanization and deforestation which can be dealt by controlled town areas with the use of clean energy and mass education for understanding the crucial role of trees in the environment.
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- Some people think that watching sports in one's free time is just a waste of time.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 56
- Some people think that watching sports in one's free time is just a waste of time.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... importance of trees in maintaining the worlds temperature. To be specific, such aware...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3186440678 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04386394697 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3977989042 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0326632177279 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0118138854185 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425955696387 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199489169276 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345525376745 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.