The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.
Do you agree or disagree with this view?
With the accelerating progress of industrialization and globalization, more problems are coming to light, especially environmental issues. Some argue that the most effective way to solve these problems is to make people pay more for fuel. However, I disagree and believe there is a more cost-effective approach to protect the environment, which is raising awareness through educational activities.
On the one hand, increasing the cost of fuel may seem to directly reduce its usage, but it is just a short-term solution. People rely heavily on fuel for their vehicles and are often willing to pay a premium for it. As a result, we cannot significantly lower fuel consumption, and instead, we create difficulties for low-income workers. Therefore, not only do we create a new problem - the high cost of fuel - but we also fail to address the root cause of our environmental issues.
I believe that enhancing our awareness about our planet is both an easy and affordable long-term solution for environmental problems. People are suffering the consequences of Earth's contamination and want to make a difference. For example, it is not difficult for us to use public transportation because of its convenience and affordability. Moreover, people should take part in "reduce-reuse-recycle" projects with activities such as controlling household waste disposal and categorizing trash. The success of these activities depends on our awareness.
In conclusion, increasing the cost of fuel is not the best solution for the environment. Instead, we should work together to educate people and raise awareness through various activities and projects. These could include promoting carpooling, encouraging recycling, and organizing community clean-ups. By focusing on education and changing behaviors, we can make a lasting impact on our environment without placing an undue financial burden on individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6124567474 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68354745652 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4016257237 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201562425898 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669419489129 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814632359022 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122736765602 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684661683942 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.