Nowadays, humanity has been facing to the environment pollution, such as: air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution,.etc...However, two biggest environment pollution are: air pollution and waste.Firstly, gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, causes polar ice caps to melt, which can cause the earth to sink into the sea. Secondly, as the human pollution increase lead to produce evergreater, quantifies of waste, which spoil the earth and contuminate rivers and oceans, making the creatures living below dead water. Therefore, to minimize the harmful effects of environmental pollution, we need to have some solutions such as planting trees, not throwing garbage indiscriminately, treating emissions before discharging into the environment, using energy from solar, wind, water power to save energy. Besides, we need to raise awareness and propagate to everyone about the harmful effects of environmental pollution to protect the environment together.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: zuhdamila92
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...llution, water pollution, soil pollution,.etc...However, two biggest environment p...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... water pollution, soil pollution,.etc...However, two biggest environment pollution are:...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... pollution are: air pollution and waste.Firstly, gas emissions from factories and exhau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87671232877 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4301052561 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664383561644 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0147046104 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 214.5 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.5 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257087896913 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151879083177 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111356318052 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257087896913 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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