Environment pollution

Essay topics

Nowadays, humanity has been facing to the environment pollution. Air pollution and waste are the two most important problems that need to be overcome.There are many causes of air pollution and waste, but the main cause is the emissions emitted from vehicles, factories. Firstly, the gas emissions lead to global warming, causes polar ice caps to melt, which may have a devastating on the earth. Secondly, as the human pollution increase lead to produce evergreater, quantifies of waste, which spoil the earth and contuminate rivers and oceans, making the creatures living below dead water, causing the stench to rise. Garbage is discharged too much, not treated, leading to stench. Or improper disposal of waste pollutes the air.
Air pollution causes many serious consequences leading to the death of many animals.Therefore, to minimize the harmful effects of environmental pollution, we need to have some solutions such as planting trees, not throwing garbage indiscriminately, treating emissions before discharging into the environment, using energy from solar, wind, water power to save energy. Besides, we need to raise awareness and propagate to everyone about the harmful effects of environmental pollution to protect the environment together.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...rtant problems that need to be overcome.There are many causes of air pollution and wa...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...es leading to the death of many animals.Therefore, to minimize the harmful effects of env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55497382199 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10831659946 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.759304781 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.625 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255452703476 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117978113567 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906402733963 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202204518038 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249800433446 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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