environmental
It is argued that environmental protection is a complex and difficult task, so only governments and big firms have the capacity to improve the environment. However, I partly agree with the opinion.
I believe that human activities have the greatest impact on the environment. Firstly, If we reduce discharge pollutants, the environment will be improved significantly. For example, the plastic shopping bags are very difficult to decompose. Instead of, we use plastic shopping bags, we should use eco-friendly to substitute such as paper bags. Secondly, overexploitation of natural resources will lead to depleting natural resources. When people cut down trees, they have to plan new trees to replace them.
On the other hand, some problems can just solve by the government. The government enacts law and policy to fight climate change. They can priority to promote environmental-friendly high-technology. The government must commission an independent environmental impact assessment whenever a new development is proposed. Moreover, the large companies have a direct effect on the environment. If the large firm cut down on emissions from their production, the air pollution will reduce significantly. They should use renewable energies such as winds, the hydro and solar power to alternatives energy resource.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly believe that not only government, large companies but also the citizen in the world can improve quality-environment.
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| 2024-12-14 | Sang Sang Sang | 73 | view |
| 2024-12-13 | Sang Sang Sang | 78 | view |
| 2024-10-11 | Tuan Harry | 78 | view |
| 2024-09-24 | Tuan Harry | 84 | view |
| 2024-09-21 | Tuan Harry | 89 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63555555556 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5236232755 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.282774009 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293581093784 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977816819525 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131759733598 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201543184842 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880952082713 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.