Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world, people are giving more concern about the ecosystem, and protecting the environment is the duty of the authorities. While it is true that individuals can not contribute significantly to protecting the nature, I argue that both governments and citizens should be responsible for this.
To commence with, local and national authorities should take serious actions in saving the environment. In particular, they should enforce strict green regulations for their dwellers to follow since not everyone is conscious about this pressing issue. Singapore, for example, has implement rules such as no gum on the subway or do not throw trashes on the streets. Thanks to such regulations, Singapore could be counted as one of the cleanest urban area in the world because not only the local people in the region, but also visitors from abroad have to follow the rules if they do not want to get punished by the laws.
Furthermore, it is also the responsibility of the citizens themselves to protect their living environment. Firstly, they could decrease pollution in the surrounding area by using less plastic products and try to recycle or reuse when possible. Takeaway drinks, for instance, instead of using paper or plastic cups, customers could bring their own cups, which could be in metal or glass. Secondly, people living in urban areas should use public transports or bikes more often instead of driving petrol-based vehicles. This is because those transportations could contribute significantly to the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, which has detrimental impacts on human health, namely lung cancer or lung diseases.
In conclusion, as protecting the environment has become one of the pressing issues these days, the responsible is of authorities as well as individuals. Together, they could rebuild a green world, where the wildlife is safe and the air is fresh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...issues these days, the responsible is of authorities as well as individuals. Toge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26557377049 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94667468442 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3737945143 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112284845693 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411820537267 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508078093117 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715264479935 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410779624722 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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