Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this current era, an enormous number of consumers are concerned about food options between organic food and traditional food. In fact, people have different views whether organic food is worth-eating or not despite its cost thus this essay will clarify both sides before forming my personal opinion.
On the one hand, the majority of consumers decide to buy the amount of traditional food on the account of providing as a catalyst for tremendous economical with employees do not have enough money. Furthermore, classic foods are sold everywhere such as supermarket, outdoor market and so on that is reason why people could purchase easier and save time to find out something, especially the food items are extremely multi-form to reasonable choose to provide nutrition from the difference in food source. However, the qualities of them are not examined carefully before publishing the market so nobody could ensure about the safety level, there by the foodstuff is reported that it contain GMO (genetically modified organism) or any elements chemical of toxic such chemical pesticides or chemical fertilizers which cause bad effects to the public’s healthy.
On the other hand, many experts researched the way to lessen the foreign chemical and give comprehensive merits for well-being which is organic foods. At a glance, it is evident that the basic foods are GMO free, that is, they are not genetically engineered in nature because they are processed through strict standards and high required before being ingested lead to portion of the population could completely believe to use them. More beneficially, the organic food contribute to more intake of nutritionally advantageous antioxidants include prevention of damage disease attack such as cancer, vision problem but the non-organic does not have. By contrast, although the buyers has pay a huge budget for them that could be double than the traditional food, they find it worth- consuming to protect their healthy.
In conclusion, organic foods outweigh foodstuff as a result of seeming to be trend hence the locals tend to buy the organic food more than others but it depends on personal financial condition. Personally, I opined that the organic food could give an huge number of benefits more drammatical than conventional food
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30327868852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82421822914 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4296181598 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.454545455 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2727272727 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12040384061 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546824138295 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274507009654 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800054187187 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307916785667 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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