Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and ages, an increasing number of consumers are concerned about food choice between organic food and traditional food. In fact, a portion of population assert that compared to common foodstuff, the cost of organic food appear to be more pricey, but it indeed worth-buying. Personally, i completely agree with this point of view for some certain reasons.
At the first glances, it is acquiesced that so diverse are non-organic fruits and vegetables that housewifes can achieve a wealth of ingredient options for doing the cooking, giving rise to a flavour temptation for family dinnings. Moreover, traditional nourishments seem to be more afforable than organic nourishments, thereby meeting the ever growing food demand in society regardless of the difference in incomes. Nevertheless, common foods also acts as a catalyst for human health risks. Due to the fact that non-organic food products virtually contain a great amount of antibiotic drug or pesticide, consequently, if consumers intake in the long run, they can be susceptible to dangerous deseases such as cancer, disgestive dysfunctions.
In contrast, organic foods are free of toxic chemicals, therefore, individuals can not only defend themself against health issues but also drive wholesome benefits from involved nature viatmins and minerals, significantly contributing to a better overall health. However, because of higher cost, low bar incomes find it overpriced to consume daily. It is because that as opposed to industrial farming, organic farming are guied by stric standards of production, processing and preservation, which forbid harmful chemicals, hence, resulting in an increase in the cost of organic foods. Despite that, it’s price absolutely appropriate with it’s quality.
In conclusion, although organic foods quite more expensive, people should protect their health by consuming organic food products rather than traditional foods because prevention is better than cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6835016835 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02221141898 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9160210538 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144314317719 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513373135532 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410527693704 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867893398134 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310025307566 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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