Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A minority of people are convinced that meat will not remain as the world’s principal sustenance in foreseeable future. This school of thought denotes serious concerns related to growing and eating animals. I do have the same opinion. Alanysing how eating meat is damaging the environment will show the validity of this choice.
Firstly, there are numerous threats to the environment; however, among the most significant ones is meat production. As an illustration, poultry by itself demands roughly one-fifth of daily sanitary water consumption world over. Contradictory, one-third of the global population seldom have access to drinking water. Were not economically affluent people heavily relying on chicken, would this portion of the population enjoy having access to drinking water, an undeniable human right.
Secondly, although meat consumption is hailed as a key factor to provide humans' body with essential amino acids and particular vitamins, e.g., B2, there are several diseases linked with a carnivorous diet. For example, various cancers, diabetes, and heart strokes are statistically witnessed among meat eaters more than vegetarians, according to leading dietitians. That is to say, people are suffering principally due to overconsumption, not malnutrition. Thus, in tandem with meat consumption come pressing health concerns.
Not only there are tangible negative effects because of eating meat, but also there are ethical ones. Considering that animals are sentient beings living at the mercy of humans illustrates this. The sight of a cow slain while witnessed by its baby is in sharp contrast with humanity's morality. seldom is slaughtering animals distinguishable from committing crimes as it requires bare violence, likely leading to violation of humans' rights.
In summary, eating meat has negative ramifications including water shortage around the world and health issues. These drawbacks will likely remain as ongoing concerns in the modern world in foreseeable future. After looking at the consequences of eating meat, my idea is on par with those who argue against such a diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seldom
...sharp contrast with humanitys morality. seldom is slaughtering animals distinguishable...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'seldom' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is seldom
...sharp contrast with humanitys morality. seldom is slaughtering animals distinguishable fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, while, for example, in summary, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.634375 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97596983929 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0091110232 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8947368421 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120739895433 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383240556789 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340517438147 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661233170456 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255568409926 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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