Every thousands of student go overseas to study. Although many benefit from the experience, others go home disappointed. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying in another country?
Studying abroad is becoming prevalence in recent years and the widespread migration of students has caused different arguments. Some group of people claim that studying overseas has many benefits for all students in different ages. While others contend that this may cause difficulties for them. To a certain point of view, it seems that this issue may open new doors to students. However, we can not overlook its adversities. This essay will deal with arguments of both sides of this controversial issue and give a conclusion.
On the one hand, those people who are in favour of studying abroad subject express their views cogently. First of all, many students want to attend a prestigious university to pursue their academic educations in higher levels. These universities often employ best teachers around the world and offer courses with high qualifies. Therefore, in long-term, when they return home, they get better job opportunities. Secondly, students who are studying in foreign countries learn to become more independent. They live far from their families; so they are responsible for cooking, cleaning and other chores. Finally, they are exposed to various cultures and languages. They will learn new language and start to communicate with new people who have new customs. Thus it opens student’s mind to new ideas.
By contrast, those who are against studying abroad have reasons that can not be ignored. The most obvious drawbacks are language barrier and culture conflict. This means that living in a country which have different language and culture could be challenging. If students could not adapt to these different styles, they encounter with many problems. For instance, when a student is not fluent in host country’s first language, he or she should conquer with communication problems. In result of these problems, they become alone and feel depressed. Moreover, tuition fees for overseas students are higher than native students. Admittedly they can receive funds and discounts from universities. Notwithstanding, they either have to work hard or ask for financial helps from their families.
Overall it is logical to conclude that, in spite of the all hardships, studying in a foreign country is a positive experience and gives students new insights into the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'employ the best'.
Suggestion: employ the best
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e with new people who have new customs. Thus it opens student's mind to new ide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3489010989 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82644513736 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585164835165 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8155639885 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.88 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.56 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149949588736 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418765682635 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433977293929 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093061583574 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127199014698 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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