In the today’s rapidly developing globalized World, minority languages have become one of the most controversial problems requiring immediate attention. In what comes next, I will do my best to explain why we should protect these languages from extinction.
While there are a number of possible way to justify my position, one of the main arguments in this debate is that language is the important part of culture and history. If language dies out, whole nation will risk to lose its roots, origin, and continuity. One can take literature that was written in one of dead languages as an example. As a rule, such books describe significant moments of past life or vital thoughts of our ancestors and we aren’t able fully understand the main idea of texts, even though we would try to learn such language, we wouldn’t speak it, that’s why It is difficult to catch the key point of manuscripts.
On the other hand, that is so true that global language is very positive phenomenon and it has their merits. Firstly, it opens borders between different countries. If you speak world language, travelling will become much easier for you. Furthermore, global language unites various nations. For instance, now scientists from all over the world speak and make presentations of their inventions only in English, this fact, of course, fosters scientific progress.
To conclude, I consider that in the future more and more people will speak English, as a global language. However, it is also crucial not to forget your own language and try to save it for future generations. In other words, every educational person should learn at least two languages: mother and world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risk losing'.
Suggestion: risk losing
...If language dies out, whole nation will risk to lose its roots, origin, and continuity. One ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, at least, for instance, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07942238267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82669866426 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2155172296 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148867737722 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496684467319 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370392911573 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083924819687 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00470994281986 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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