Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days more and more languages are dying out. Some people appreciate this trend because they think that people can communicate more easily with fewer languages. I generally agree.
Having fewer languages increases the possibility of speaking in the same language and causes people understand each other more easily. When people get clustered into fewer groups, each language makes you able to communicate with more people. For instance, if Persian became prevalent among all Middle East countries, the population of people who you can contact with, would be increased. In addition, if people speak in the same language, the probability of misunderstanding will decline. People can communicate with each other fluently and be sure that they pass their point properly.
On the other hand, dying out some languages causes vanishing the identity of some ethnics. Some older documents of those ethnic groups can be barely read and understood. Hence, we should keep the ability of learning different languages besides, moving forward to making communication more easily. For instance, we have many different local languages in Iran and each of these languages has their own backgrounds. Many songs have been written in these languages which are valuable. So, by documenting these relic things, we should do all our efforts to minimize what we lose in this process.
Dying some languages is not a disaster if we have saved and documented all its heritages. Therefore, re-dividing people to bigger groups which have a same language, is an opportunity to reach the goal of global village.
- Some people today believe that the world s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world s economy 73
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 84
- The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees Not all students can afford the so some people think that university education should be free for everyone To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tion more easily. For instance, we have many different local languages in Iran and each of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28853754941 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73703357278 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9124167645 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301715064243 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099868533502 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605475064725 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185988490132 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060739668903 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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