Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
These days considerable number of languages are near to their extinction. In this regard, some people believe that If the language diversity range becomes narrower, the communication in daily life would be more convenient. Although it seems there are some advantages for extinction lots of languages, I do not think its benefits could outweigh its disastrous consequences.
On the one hand, by limited number of languages, people would be able to understand easily each other in all over the world. It can be imagined if people speak one current language, they would not be worried about that whole or some of their implications would be missed by translating. In addition, they would more feel that entire the world is their homeland. Thus, existing few common languages across the world could be a way to encourage nations to become a united nation. And it helps people follow cosmopolitan approach.
However, this trend has many catastrophic consequences on the body of people's culture and history. culture and history are known as the fundamental points of people's life. it means if these become neglected, characters of these people will be forgotten. More over, People inevitably become familiar with other cultures by learning their relevant languages. To illustrate that a recent report in Education Today weekly magazine stated that a considerable proportion of multilingual students became familiar with culture history of other nations while they were studying a new language. Therefore learning language can be considered an effective incentive for studying other cultures.
To sum up, elimination of languages could improve daily people's communications. But this approach has potential to expose world's history to a critical situation. so I strongly disagree with this idea just because of consequences that have been mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94876312936 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3670728058 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256325502544 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808392283214 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037570167024 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16241661147 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272407606602 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.