Nowadays, we all know that the international language is English, which is for the convenience of people from all over the world to communicate and interact. Some people think that we should not use the same language because many languages are disappearing. However, I believe that the disappearance of some languages is not important but what is important is the culture.
First of all, the vanishing language doesn't matter, because it must disappear for a reason. It may be that these languages are not practical for modern life or that it is difficult to pronounce and other factors. For example, there are many isolated tribes in Africa, and they all have their own independent languages. No one can understand them, but they must learn the universal language if they are to communicate with the outside world. In this way, they can express their ideas and spread their culture.
Second, the disappearance of some small languages has little impact on the world, while those who once spoke those small languages can communicate with others in the languages of the majority. In addition, I think that small language speakers learning the universal language can help them spread their own culture so that they can preserve their own culture and record their culture and traditions in a language that can be fully translated. The loss of culture is more important than the loss of language.
In conclusion, the purpose of language is to communicate and express emotions, and the disappearance of some languages is acceptable if one of them is not affected. The loss of language is meaningful if it is for the purpose of spreading culture and facilitating communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... First of all, the vanishing language doesnt matter, because it must disappear for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03971119134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88836190024 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465703971119 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4168358825 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265725625999 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110637374727 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710622955346 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18167586322 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606310521033 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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