Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The variety of nations and cultures in the world lead the number of languages become uncounted. Every year several languages disappear due to natural result of the globalization process, while other languages become dominant around the world such as English language. Many of us assume that basically, people only need few languages to make easier interaction but other argued this notion. To my way of thinking, having similar languages will make people more convenient with each other and avoid potential discriminations even though it might endanger cultural existences.
Language is the key of interaction. Admittedly, similarity of languages could reduce language barrier and make communication easier. There is the fact that people tend to become silent and unwilling to interact when they meet someone who have different mother languages. Tourists; for example, prefer to use google to find any attractive locations than ask to local people who are more know about their place. More importantly, the differences of languages bring up gaps into community. The violation of human rights and discriminations happen unconsciously as long as we live in the developing world. Multinational companies; for instance, prefer to hire people who have good english skill and consequently people who do not come from english native countries must study hard to become more competent.
Apart from those reasons, languages have important influences on cultural existences. Languages drive common features with rest of culture such as social phenomenons, histories, and symbols. If young people are no longer to speak local language, it will be difficult to learn their own culture. Research carried out by statistics center in Toronto shows that several cultures and traditions are losing at fast pace following the disappearance some languages over the past ten years. Hence, it raised the concern about losing local identity.
All thinking considered, having few languages might tackle social problems in the world; nonetheless, we could not ignore that we also have responsibility to preserve local culture for our next generation.
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Essay evaluation report
The variety of nations and cultures in the world lead the number of languages become uncounted.
The variety ... leads the number of languages to become uncounted.
to local people who are more know about their place.
to local people who know more about their places.
Sentence: Tourists; for example, prefer to use google to find any attractive locations than ask to local people who are more know about their place.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to than and ask
at fast pace
at a fast pace
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1763 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.391 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.797 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.674 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146814404432 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.135734072022 0.0946595960268 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0554016620499 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0332409972299 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1108033241 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0193905817175 0.0403226058552 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91350494561 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360110803324 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00554016620499 0.00163938923432 338% => OK
Determiners: 0.0581717451524 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193905817175 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138504155125 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2134.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.52599388379 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.434250764526 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299694189602 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244648318043 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186544342508 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91350494561 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639143730887 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 77.7511388349 60.7387585426 128% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2352941176 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4076328805 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.529411765 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.2047130779 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.67058823529 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314459040538 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0794572885358 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0579753840932 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464631248299 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174686286174 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106288846745 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451671715912 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282377983834 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106159367514 0.0638462369009 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196161997386 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469810034004 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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