There is no exaggeration to say that each day a huge amount of foods is being wasted by the people around the world. There are various factors contributing to this trend. However, I believe that both the common people and the authorities should take effective measures to tackle this negative trend.
One apparent reason for food wastage is the due to the lack of appropriate plans, especially for the weekly menu in each household. People tend to buy lots of things even they don't need often driven by special offers in supermarkets, which will lead to food leftovers and finally wasting or throwing of foods. For example, some people prepare lots of food without any planning and preserve the partially used food in refrigerator, but usually forget to reuse results in expiry of food and finally dump it as waste. In addition, errors in industrial processing or any other compromise that diminishes quality of final food products also a biggest driving factor for food wastage. For instance, sometimes, due to some food safety errors, many food processing companies have to throw large quantities of food before transferring to retailers. Thus, both consumers and industries can cause food wastage through different ways.
One of the most effective solution to curb wastage of food is to plan carefully before purchasing and cooking foods and always try to buy only necessary things. Furthermore, the authorities should ensure having efficient technologies and production systems that better storage, harvesting, processing and the distribution process
To conclude, both the consumers and food industries have equal responsibilities in food wasting. So, they have to plan properly and utilize the available technologies to minimize food waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30215827338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8570391561 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6402758532 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140060740049 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599617788873 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232627207632 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085909625395 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387510892959 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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