These days, as the cost of living increases most people around the world always looks for a job with better remuneration rather than any other benefits that a job could provide. Even though, money is one among the vital factors to consider for any job, I believe that one should also think about the other prime factors like job satisfaction and nature of the job before choosing any career.
Firstly, job satisfaction is one of the important factors to consider before applying any job, because most of the people wish to have a feeling of fulfillment or enjoyment from their profession. Moreover, the employee should experience not only a sense of accomplishment, but also a pleasure from his job. For instance, some highly qualified people, regardless of their education and profit, they prefer to do low paid jobs just for a sense of satisfaction. Thus, one should choose a job which they think would give them mental satisfaction rather than monetary benefits.
Secondly, the nature of also an important factor for the workers. Also, It is obvious to think about the problems and challenges that the people will go through by selecting a particular career. Even if, some job offers a high salary, the nature of the job will be more challenging. For instance, if a person, who has a qualification in arts, cannot choose a career in management, because here the working environment is entirely different. So, this is the one of the reasons why I believe that the nature of the job is as important as financial benefits.
In conclusion, Apart from the monetary benefits, one should also consider about the job satisfaction and the working environment before choosing any career to become more successful in their own jobs.
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- Everyday, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problems? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79052189293 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1985588512 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294810980324 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114529107182 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489507707106 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190486514862 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608966668874 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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