Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays a vast amount of people should consume more vegetables and fruits and as little meat as possible because intake higher amount of meat can cause of several serious health complications such as obesity, cardiovascular disease and etcetera. Furthermore, in my perception, consumption of vegetarian diet is better in various manners to live healthy lifestyle. However, I strongly accord with the notion.
The are multifarious reasons to support this prospective and an initial is that plant foods are filled with vitamins, minerals and other food values which crucial for human bodies. In addition to this, those food items provide help masses to lose their weight, less chances to caught by perilous ailments and so on. Additionally, these plants offer fibre to people who protect them from harmful disease. Even though, vegetables and fruits are cheaper in prices so that is why everyone such as wealthy and pour can easily afford these items. Moreover, if majority of humans start to eat vegetarian diets than they can eligible to live a long, happy, ailments free life as well. Apart from this, these diet foods are not only better for people but also our environment. For example, a survey conducted by media reported that today a huge proportion of humans are adopting vegetarian diets rather than meat the reason is that it is lead to lots of benefits related to our health.
On the other hand, a certain portion of meat is an essential for a balance diet because it contains protein, calcium and other vitamins. Nevertheless, these can also gained from alternative sources like beans, mushrooms and nuts. Most meats are cholesterol-rich, which is detrimental to the human body and leads to disease. On the top of that, deadly illness for instance cardiovascular disease, fatness as well as brain haemorrhage are increasing gradually all around the world due to high intake of red meat in various regions. Last but not least, I believe that a vegetarian diet is a prefect solution to all these problems. For instance, a present survey conducted by world health organisation reported that in an European nations a higher percentage of those people who died due to overweight, rise levels of cholesterol who lead to heart attacks who came from consuming more proportion of red meat.
In conclusion, a healthy diet determines our well-being and life expectancy, since a vegetarian diet is for beneficial than meats, we should choose wisely and decline our meat intake as little as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11922141119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80452441223 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559610705596 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2050410178 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.764705882 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240396165818 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682260411211 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608427754258 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1497300717 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392334181748 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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