In this day and age, it is believed that should have a vegan meal rather than meat eating to live a healthy life. From my perspective, I partly agree with statement followed by some explanations.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects that consuming a plant - based diet brings to society. Initially, people who eat only vegetables may mitigate the dangers from diseases related to meat over-consumption because vegetarian diets basically are low in fat and high in fiber. This could prevent us from health problems such as obesity inflammation and cardio vascular diseases. Moreover, it also avoids killing and consuming animals, which results in a compassionate and benevolent life style. More specially, it is noticeable that the population of animals is at the risk at diminishment. Hence, this is not only advantageous for ourselves but also for animals.
On the other hand, although becoming vegetation is really beneficial, there are some disadvantages that should be considered. Firstly, eating a vegan meal is not suitable for those who need more energy such as children, teenagers for manual workers due to lack of nutrients and calories. Consequently, they will feel unable to do anything of they eat merely vegetables. Furthermore, because meat is a crucial source of energy for human bodies which is really hard to replace, keeping up with a meat-free is quite difficult and therefore, people tend to have week commitment to maintain a vegan diet.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my opinion that being a vegetarian has it own demerits and merits. It is also important for us to balance both meat and vegetables to live a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... opinion that being a vegetarian has it own demerits and merits. It is also importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16788321168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00057074461 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4255049397 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246146140318 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668237327082 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644064777685 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134375085037 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607710646985 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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