Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people argued that it is unnecessary to kill animal for food and healthy diet is possible without meat. I completely agree with this view.
There are a variety of reasons for humans to stop eating meat, but many people still choose to be meat-eaters. Firstly, many diseases are caused by animals, from farm to wild-ones. One of the deadly epidemic diseases that caused fatal to millions of people was Ebola, which was believed the disease was spread by a man who ate insect-eating bats in West Africa. A vegetarian diet could have prevented this and millions of lives could have been safe. Secondly, eating plants can provide enough nutrients to our body without the need of eating meat, since many common animals got the nutrients from leaves and plants, human do not need to gain that beneficial passively.
Thirdly, all lives can feel the painfulness, but humans chose to ignore the suffering that the animals have to go through. There are many human beings are vegetarian for moral reasons, and I am myself a vegan for years cannot bare the fact that animals are being killed and tortured every single day of their lives. Many meat-eaters also argued that animals are a part of human food chain, where I completely disagree. It is a part of human food chain because human choose to label it so.
In conclusion, I believe that eating plants and being vegetarians not only can give human a healthy selection of food, but also can help save the animals from the unnecessary pain from killing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44182006034 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1357481666 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178328012015 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647654032957 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491067649099 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10673188951 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051009092309 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.