everyone should stay at school until 18. to what extent do you agree or disagree
There is an opinion which advocates that all youngsters should stay on school until 18. In spite of the argument for leaving school before 18, I agree that the young should finish their learning in school until 18.
There are two important arguments in favour of leaving school when those was young. Firstly, in some countries, continuing learning in school until 18 is a preparation of higher education. There may be lack of vocational training which provide youngster a chance to gain valuable experiences and skills. As a result, those who might want to follow a plenty of manual labors such as electricians or car mechanical might be not participate in their work which those pursue. Secondly, family background is taken into consideration about the younger leave school at young age. Not all of family are not able to afford for youngsters to follow to school. Youngsters have to quit their school and make ends meet to improve their quality of their lives.
However, apart from the argument express above, I concur that learning until 18 is compulsory for student. Firstly, staying until 18 make youngsters have more opportunities. With the significant increase of global economy, plenty of companies require education qualifications and skills which are learned in school and youngster can have job prospect including promotions and high salary. After that, the learning until 18 can help decrease social issues. Students have fewer opportunities to turn into criminal than those who abandon their learning in school before 18, and cannot improving the quality of society.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70929344961 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8099752712 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232443629788 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968844833071 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863916146825 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203353730691 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108700537002 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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