Advertising has become part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that advertising bring many benificial impacts on our lives. Personally, effect of advertising is positive, but if we do not control it, it will make a lot of negative effects on social.
On the one hand, advertising help the product can be sold easier. The guests will never know the products if they do not see them before. For example, a restaurant create a new dish, if the restaurant do not introduce with the guest, promote to general public, the guests will never know about the new dish, and they cannot eat them. Beside, advertising can bring lots of usefull information with everyone. For instance, the unemployed is finding a job, a company is finding a member, and through advertising, the unemployed finded a job, the company had a new member.
On the other hand, advertising can spread lots of negative or false information. For example, nowadays, many companies are promoting the electronic cigarettes widely, a poisonous product, and fooling the teenagers that it is not toxic, while that is incorrect. this action can make the lung cancel rate increase significantly. other example is selling the counterfeit or fake goods. many people copy the product of other company without permission and sell with the cheaper cost. this could cause market disruption and reduce competiveness. if the government do not control this, the result can be worst with the residant.
In conlusion, I think advertising has both sides of impact. Therefore, it is important to use the advertising effectively to make a healthy society for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09689922481 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88429653753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.28823274 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156516111688 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597391447091 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692123028951 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123410262525 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727431110996 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.