Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, many children usually spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Admittedly, smartphones have many benefits, but using smartphones too much brings more negative effects than positive effects.
On the one hand, smartphones bring some advantages to children. Firstly, they can contact anyone, like parents and friends, easily. children can call friends anywhere they want, do not be nervous about the distance. Bad weather, long distance, the permission of parents are not essential. Therefore, children always use smartphones to contact friends. Secondly, the study of children can be easier than before if they use smartphones to learn. they can research many documentaries about the subject they learn in school like math, history, geography, chemistry. they can learn many skills the school doesn't teach such as editing, presentation, cooking,making up.children do not need to go to the library to find a book they want, where usually they do not find the thing they need.
On the other hand, smartphones have many negative effects on children.Undeniable, contents on phones are very attractive,but many harmful content can make children depend on the smartphones such as social media, game, film, comic if they do not use these effectively. And if they become addicted, they will spend more time of day using the phone,and do not have time for study, playing sports, or hanging out with friends. Then, score decrease, health decrease, and they have to suffer obesity. Besides, In internet, there are many toxic information can make the their cognition change negatively such as violence, drug.For instance, if children watch a violent video too much everyday, they tend to be more violent.Therefore, Controlling the content children watch is essential for the growing of them.
In conclusion, smartphones have both advantages and disadvantages.if we use these effectively, it will be a useful tutor for children. but if we abuse smartphones, it can cause many terrible consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48076923077 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0995694384 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3110018772 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160915491635 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651210918612 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05390516064 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115207115436 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562399944734 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.