Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years this has become a serious problem for parents that their children devoted most of times surfing with their smartphones. In my opinion it can be have a lot of trouble results if parents don’t tackle with it.
By growing the technology and present the smartphones into the market everything has be changed suddenly. The young generation spend most of their time on their smartphones because these devices have a lot of facilities to do. Hence, these children daily use their phones more than 15 hours. In the long-term it has bad effect on your body, soul, and nervous. The parents have a crucial role in these situations. Although it is the tight of any child needs to play and use phones in new generation it is be control with the parents how much time you have allowed to be use. Some boys and girls use with their phones even when they are in bed. Not only do have a bad effect on your vision but also, your body get weak and lose your temperature rapidly because of effects on your nervous. Hence, parents should prevent with it by setting a sensible role for their children.
On the other hand, these generation don’t have any identity in the society because all of their time spent in social media and unreal society. It has irreparable impact on your personality in the future. But this technology is so good if use it correctly and you can find some friends who live oversea or pay online and shopping online. All of them are good even use correctly. Not only these types of children fear from society and face with other people but also, they cannot have a real communication with different people. They will become to an introverted person in whole of their life. Therefore, the impact of using smartphones is a lot if parents don’t try to tackle it or don’t have any information about its harmful effects.
In conclusion, spending a specific time with smartphones are good especially for children who want to play and watch move but more than normal time never advices to parents because of its results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the times') or simply say ''most times''.
Suggestion: most of the times; most times
...for parents that their children devoted most of times surfing with their smartphones. In my o...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...rtphones into the market everything has be changed suddenly. The young generation ...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... and use phones in new generation it is be control with the parents how much time ...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
...or their children. On the other hand, these generation don’t have any identity in the society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65193370166 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45729683676 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.232861719 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6315789474 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148921133407 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486097569488 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493697231999 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965402725803 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184180392111 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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