Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that Advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubted that advertisements are helping the manufacturer to promote and market their product and service to consumers. It has brought about substantial changes which accelerate/boost the development of consuming and trading in society. Some people believe this has both positive and negative impacts on our lives, and personally, I completely agree with such viewpoints.
On the one hand, active advertising activities contribute to economic development by stimulating the market. Advertising is one of the main means for marketing industrial goods and services. Without the help of aggressive advertising businesses it is difficult to publicize their products or brands. The more they advertise, the more opportunities they have to sell their goods. From the consumer's perspective, advertising also plays a clear role in making the right choice. Advertising can be informative and offers a wider range of options that best suit each consumer's interests and values.
On the other hand, too much advertising money causes many social problems. Firstly, increasing costs cause a greater burden for/on both customers and industry. Secondly, too many ads can encourage impulsive shopping behaviour for consumers and it can also mislead buyers by making it difficult to make the right decision. Finally, there are some violent advertisements that are inappropriate for impressionable children who may mimic/imitate these bad behaviours even though they do not understand.
In conclusion, the fact that advertisements of all types surround people can influence their lives in both positive and negative ways, and companies should consider giving accurate information, and reduce their budgets for advertising to mitigate the drawbacks mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...they have to sell their goods. From the consumers perspective, advertising also plays a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75862068966 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1973908933 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4809257326 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230600774694 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715465332581 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500553249038 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134212708975 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365917253094 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.