Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some people think that encouraging children to have a healthy diet at school is the best, while some opponents prefer to help them learn this at home. I believe that, while both options can have a major impact on student’s diet, a combination of both might be the best choice for children.
It is clearly that meals in schools can help children become familiar with healthy foods. For one, children hardly ever have a choice to choose food that they eat. Therefore, if schools prepare healthy meals, students will try to eat them.This could have the effect of allowing students to try healthy dishes that they might not have enjoyed before. One other benefit of school meals is that children tend to follow the majority, that they usually under their fiends’ pressure to be encouraged to eat a healthy food item, or they could be more likely to taste healthier dishes if they see their friends enjoying them.
However, being encouraged by parents at home plays a vital role in creating heathy eating (diet ) habits. In contrast with schools’ meals, which are rated to be unappetizing, homemade meals might be more delicious. And this comfortable sense might makes it easier for children to try the new ones that are healthier. This process can be made even easier if parents adjust the menu to fit their child’s tastes, while still healthy with their children. However, these options can be hard and challage with parenta who are working because they are very time-consuming and labour-intensive.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that both schools and families play an important role in encouraging children to adjust their diets. However, to help children certainly have an environment to eating healthy foods, schools and household need to have a close combination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03040540541 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60516349317 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5645932658 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321916545665 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123666818421 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112996627482 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229649427435 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144441945766 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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