Today there are plenty of opposing opinions about whether intelligent machines will gradually replace the human race in present-day society. Many people argue that it can generate more drawbacks when using these machines in almost all industries. However, I strongly disagree with this point of view, and my reasons are as follows.
Today there are plenty of opposing opinions about whether intelligent machines will gradually replace the human race in present-day society. Many people argue that it can generate more drawbacks when using these machines in almost all industries. However, I strongly disagree with this point of view, and my reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, nowadays many experts think that installing and using a large number of modern facilities in most industrial zones has detrimental impacts on blue-collar workers. Thousands of these people are facing unemployment or choosing other jobs to improve their life. Additionally, other specialists affirm that these modern machines are considered as essential machinery to enhance working productivity, but they cannot replace the laborers in some specialised fields. Each machine has a certain period of use, so the maintenance team of most technical companies have to check and repair it regularly if any trouble occurs. Therefore, without the support of manual laborers, these firms cannot catch up with working progress. As a consequence, using these modern equipment can create more disadvantages for laborers.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that intelligent equipment brings more benefits for users. It also plays an important role in most technology companies with many outstanding features. For example, nowadays, owning a laptop computer with internet connections has become more popular in developed countries. A large number of people can easily work and study everywhere. Many managers have to go on business trips frequently, so laptops are an indispensable tool to communicate and work with their partners and staff. Additionally, there are many kinds of websites to study foreign languages, so most students can have more chances to study and practice directly with native teachers by computer or laptop. Due to the innovation of smartphones, most leading technology firms such as Apple, Samsung, Oppos, etc, have generated more functions on each product to allow users to download many popular apps on their phone to serve personal purposes such as shopping, studying, working, and making friends, and so on. Because of the outbreak of Covid 19 epidemic, when going out is limited, most consumers have a tendency to set some favoured apps such as Lazada, Shopee, Payoo, etc, on their phone to buy food and others instead of going to the stores or supermarket. Thus, there are many advantages that sophisticated equipment can bring for the shoppers.
Based on the above-mentioned facts, although many people argue that smart machines have negative impacts on the users, I firmly believe that the benefits they bring outweigh the disadvantages in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'work in progress'?
Suggestion: work in progress
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39485981308 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85099868649 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8666530561 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.526315789 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332827393253 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104595377371 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151801687681 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259424746533 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245669813075 0.056905535591 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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