Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While some adventurous people enjoy the excitement from participating in extreme sports such as skiing and sky diving, some other people think the government should prohibit these sports because they are life-threatening. I completely disagree with this statement.
Firstly, everyone has the freedom of participating in a certain sport. In modern society, we value freedom of speech, freedom of sexual orientation, so why not freedom of sport? Although playing extreme sports is very dangerous for those who have limited knowledge and experience, a full growth individual should be able to assess the risk before they decide to play a sport. Moreover, people play extreme sport for different reasons, some for the joy and excitement, and some for reducing stress level. Therefore, the government has no authority to interrupt people’s freedom of choosing a sport.
Secondly, it is meaningless for the government to legislate the prohibition of extreme sport and there are more the government can do and not banning it. If there has never had a law or policies about people engaging in some detrimental habits such as smoking and drinking, why playing a sport should be banned? There are more alternatives for the governments to reduce the injuries and death rate caused by playing extreme sport, such as education. For instance, Spain government required people to attend training courses before playing an extreme sport, these training courses usually involve the risk of participating in extreme sport, the safety instruction or other related knowledge about a sport.
To sum up, I once again reaffirm my position on extreme sport should not be banned because of people’s freedom of choosing a sport and more meaningful alternatives for the government to do to reduce death rate rather than just banning it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ng in extreme sports such as skiing and sky diving, some other people think the government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3598615917 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94186029095 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6612433293 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211436092094 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924951512415 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452221406592 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145676524329 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240111090796 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.