Many parents, who decide to send their offspring to private schools, think that it should be not compulsory to afford taxes, which are used to support the national education system. In my opinion, I strongly oppose this assumption since tax is allocated for various public transactions, not just about education.
To commence with, paying tax is a legal responsibility for all citizens due to funds that are generated from such laws will be used by the government to promote the overall welfare of society. For instance, financial disbursement not just focuses on the education system alone, but also on different sectors of industry such as health care services, communication, research and development, and infrastructure. Thus, everyone should shoulder the responsibility of all those. In that case, the opinion of parents whose children study in private schools is not definitely inappropriate.
In addition to this, in terms of the legal obligation to society, it would be unfair to implement modifications to a specific group’s contribution. If a part of the population is in favor of the private system is given the special privilege in the tax law, it is likely that people will patronize such an option because it is better for their cash to spend on something that they can use for their own advantages. Therefore, the balance in the learning system would be in jeopardy and that is why this thinking should be not considered at all.
To sum up, I certainly disagree with the idea of tax exemption to people who have their children pursue private schools as it is unjustifiable to the rest of the people who diligently pay taxes.
- To ease traffic problems people are encouraged to live close to their workplaces schools To what extent do you agree or disagree with this Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01096672986 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4761209891 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318972702699 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11236744372 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728730588448 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192973656824 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419645546892 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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