There has been much discussion about whether parents of children studying at private school should be required to contribute taxes which support the public education system or not. The former, in many cases, should be more reasonable.
To the best of my knowledge, I would claim that there at least one reason why people should pay taxes for public education system, although their children study at private schools. It is clear that private education is a part of nation education system. Private schools do not use government budget but they are allowed to work by government. They use standard assessments of goverments and must obey them. Such as, using the same textbook series with public schools. These texbooks are researched and provided by government. Similarly, students from private schools also attend national exams and be evaluated by state standard, such as: university entrance exam and gifted student exams. Therefore, it is not right when thinking private education do not use nation resources and should not pay taxes for state education system.
Admittedly, families might spend more money on private education to get some benefit for their children, such as: better infrastructure, nutriention meals or studying with foreign teachers while governments only invest to public schools which they don’t use. Therefore, they should not pay taxes. However, paying taxes is obligation of each citizens for country growth. It is for community benefits. Although, people would not use all the public amenities, they always pay enough taxes. For example, my close friend who never go to public library or parks. She always pays enough all taxes.
In conclusion, I claim that people choosing private education should pay taxes for nation education system like others.
- In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes Why is this happening How should they be punished 78
- In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes Why is this happening How should they be punished 84
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects Others say it causes the loss of national identities Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inclu 56
- Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects Others say it causes the loss of national identities Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inclu 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58320616226 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.2631442183 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332970318739 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102454499066 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859917415392 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225885753449 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050853475742 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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